专题08 短文改错-十年（2012-2021）高考英语真题分项详解（全国通用） 原卷版

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专题 08 短文改错
【2021 年】
1. （2021 年全国甲卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作业，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are：Who will you go in times
of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the
same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little
choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept
very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
2. （2021 年全国乙卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the
yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some
housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more
time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing housework can be a form
of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the
topic!
【2020 年】
1.（2020·新课标Ⅰ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be
easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I
broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off
the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.
＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.
2.（2020·新课标Ⅱ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung
fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was
seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.
Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with
yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
3.（2020·新课标Ⅲ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
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My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are
in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of
egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if
we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided
by Mom with appreciation.
【2019 年】
1. 【2019·全国卷 I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1
.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary
school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I
stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net.
All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started
to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
2. 【2019·全国卷 II】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1
.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
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Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose
uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English
teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They
were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more
better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
3. 【2019·全国卷 III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1
.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it
required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe
have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical
environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes
in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
【2018 年】
1.【2018·全国卷 I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big
change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals.
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Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small
pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that
their life had improved. At the end of
our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
the
find
found
another
other
here
there
chicken
chickens
which
in where
或
happily
happy
for
but
and
2.【2018·全国卷 I I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：（1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2).只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all
sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching
them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I
unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high
school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
Friday s
Friday
’
sort
sorts
the
a
watching
watch
to
us
me
was
for
with
are
were
where
when
3.【2018·全国卷 III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be
called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity,
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others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a
larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for
learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.【2017 年】
1.【2017·全国卷 I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first
day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my
mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”
“Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few
minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle
on the road.
eighteen
eighteenth
so
but / yet
goes
went
word
words
Turning
Turn
much
late
later
suddenly
sudden
on
of
2.【2017·全国卷 I I】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a
half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is
on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for
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some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they
will invite their students pick the vegetables！
3.【2017·全国卷 III】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also
mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school
and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important
in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and
planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy
memories of your high school days.
of
had
have
and
but
took
taken
become
became
the / this
they
that / which
difference
different
late
latest
your
my
【2016 年】
1.【2016·全国新课标 I】短文改错
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in
our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells
me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using
for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that
our business will grow steady.
2.【2016·全国新课标 II】短文改错（共 10 小题，每小题 1分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；uuu
2． 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can
chose betwee n staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend
money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and
gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I
thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
3.【2016·全国新课标 III】短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1分，满分 10 分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错
误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years
in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents
didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents
couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange
clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn
to whenever need help.
【答案】
51.year—years
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52.worse—worst
53.the 去掉
54.yourself—myself
55.such—so
56.tell—told
57.freely—free
58.wear—wearing
59.to—for
60.I ∧need
4.【2016·浙江】下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time
he arrived home at end of the day,we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing
us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day
and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both
excited and frightening to be up there！
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
【2015 年】
1.(2015 年，浙江卷）
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My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit
close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field.
In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close
to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the
view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in
hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a
child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
2.(2015 年，全国卷 I）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.
Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have
been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting
dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to
do so, we’ll live to regret it.
3.(2015 年，四川卷）
下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ʌ），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3. 3.只允许修改 10 出，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and
after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays
now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go
anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to
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专题08短文改错【2021年】1.（2021年全国甲卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作业，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Lastweekourteacheraskedustofillinaquestionnaire.Oneofthequestionsare：Whowilly...

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