专题21 书面表达-十年（2012-2021）高考英语真题分项详解（全国通用） 解析版

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专题 21 书面表达
【2021 年】
1. （2021 年新高考 I卷）你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my
whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of
imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own
fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future
.
【解析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊 Youth 表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：upset→depressed
得到：receive→obtain
赏析：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of
imaginative stories. (运用了 which 引导的限制性定语从句)
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[高分句型 2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer. (运用了 as 引导的让步状语从句还运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. （2021 年全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展
示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友 Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional
customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some
advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get
more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate
my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you
can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really
appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
3. （2021 年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参
赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
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2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one possible version:
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve
problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to
broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell
the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online
learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper
way to make our study more efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding
a proper way to make our study more efficient.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true
and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
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[高分句型 2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to
be affected.（现在分词作状语）
4．（2021 年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了
《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is
its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance
to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still
playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜
欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步：审题
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体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，
第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000 多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；
have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
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1.表递进关系：what is more
2.表转折关系：however
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what 引导的主语从句）
[高分句型 2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
（现在分词作状语）
5．（2021 年1月浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。
请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because
you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that
you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
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总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．表示欢迎；
2．介绍活动安排；
3．表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate;
teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
2. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school.
3. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
4. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between
Chinese and western teaching methods.
5. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
6. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming.
7. May you have an unforgettable experience.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：at first
2.表并列补充关系：Furthermore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our
school. (运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. (运用了强调句
型)
6. （2021 年6月浙江卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容
包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 观展感受；
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3. 推荐观展。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】ln order to enrich students’ after-school life ,an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings
is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor
of the school litrary.Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to
explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.
Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of
traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。
1. 词汇积累
绘画：drawing→ painting
激发：spirit→spark
欣赏：appreciate→admire
欢迎：greet→welcome
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.
合并句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,during which every student is welcome to visit.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】
an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing
love for traditional art .本句是 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型 2】
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Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty
of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.本句是 which 引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型 3】
Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures,but also enable you understand the art of
traditional Chinese painting better. not only...but also 连接的并列句。
【2020 年】
1.（2020·新课标Ⅰ）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参
赛，内容包括:
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for
me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.
He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with
me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage
me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind
my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审
题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
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要求：
1.人物简介：
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;
第三步：连词成句
1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.
2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny
things with me about his work.
3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So
第五步：润色修改
2.（2020·新课标Ⅱ）上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这
次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；
3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【答案】 My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2
kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh
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专题21书面表达【2021年】1.（2021年新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________...

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