Jasper Fforde - Thursday Next 4 - Something Rotten

For Maddy, Rosie, Jordan & Alexander

With all my love

April 2004

The Thursday Next series in chronological order:

The Eyre Affair

Lost in a Good Book

The Well of Lost Plots

Contents

Dramatics Personae

1. A Cretan Minotaur in Nebraska

2. No Place Like Home

3. Evade the Question Time

4. A Town Like Swindon

5. Ham(let) and Cheese

6. SpecOps

7. The Literary Detectives

8. Time Waits for No Man

9. Eradications Anonymous

10. Mrs Tiggy-Winkle

11. The Greatness of St Zvlkx

12. Spike and Cindy

13. Milton

14. The Goliath Apologarium

15. Meeting the CEO

16. That Evening

17. Emperor Zhark

18. Emperor Zhark Again

19. Cloned Will Hunting

20. Chimeras and Neanderthals

21. Victory on the Victory

22. Roger Kapok

23. Granny Next

24. Home Again

25. Practical Difficulties Regarding Uneradications

26. Breakfast with Mycroft

27. Weird Shit on the M4

28. Dauntsey Services

29. The Cat Formerly Known as Cheshire

30. Neanderthal Nation

31. Planning Meeting

32. Area 21: The Elan

33. Shgakespeafe

34. St Zvlkx and Cindy

35. What Thursday Did Next

36. Kaine versus Next

37. Before the Match

38. WCL Superhoop '’88

39. Sudden Death

40. Second First Person

41. Death Becomes Her

42. Explanations

43. Recovery

44. Final Curtain

Credits

Dramatis Personae

Thursday Next: Ex-operative from Swindon's literary detective office of SpecOps 27 and

currently head of Jurisfiction, the policing agency that operates within fiction to safeguard the

stability of the written word.

Friday Next: Thursday's son, aged two.

Granny Next: Resident of Goliath Twilight Homes, Swindon. Aged no and cannot die until she

has read the ten most boring classics.

Wednesday Next: Thursday's mother. Resides in Swindon.

Landen Parke-Laine: Husband of Thursday who hasn't existed since he was eradicated in 1947

by the Goliath Corporation, eager to blackmail Miss Next.

Mycroft Next: Inventor uncle of Thursday's and last heard of living in peaceful retirement within

the backstory of the Sherlock Holmes series. Designer of Prose Portal and sarcasm early warning

device, among many other things. Husband to Polly.

Colonel Next: A time-travelling knight errant, he was eradicated by the ChronoGuard, a sort of

temporal policing agency. Despite this, he is still about and meets Thursday from time to time.

Cat, formerly known as Cheshire: The ex-Wonderland Uberlibrarian at the Great Library. And

Jurisfiction agent.

Pickwick: A pet dodo of very little brain.

Bowden Cable: Colleague of Thursday's at the Swindon Literary Detectives.

Victor Analogy: Head of Swindon Literary Detectives.

Braxton Hicks: Overall commander of the Swindon Special Operations network.

Daphne Farquitt: Romance writer whose talent is inversely proportional to her sales.

The Goliath Corporation: Vast, unscrupulous multinational corporation keen on spiritual and

global domination.

Commander Trafford Bradshaw: Popular hero in 1920s ripping adventure stories for boys, now

out of print and notable Jurisfiction agent,

Melanie Bradshaw (Mrs): A gorilla, married to Commander Bradshaw.

Mrs Tiggy-Winkle, Emperor Zhark, The Red Queen, Falstaff, Vernham Deane: All Jurisfiction

operatives, highly trained.

Yorrick Kaine: Whig politician and publishing media tycoon. Also right-wing Chancellor of

England, soon to be made dictator. Fictional, and sworn enemy of Thursday Next.

President George Formby: Octogenarian President of England and deeply opposed to Yorrick

Kaine and all that he stands for.

Wales: A socialist republic.

Lady Emma Hamilton: Consort of Admiral Horatio Lord Nelson and lush. Upset when her

husband inexplicably died at the beginning of the battle of Trafalgar. Lives in Mrs Next's spare

room.

Hamlet: A Danish prince with a propensity for prevarication.

SpecOps: Short for Special Operations, the governmental departments that deal with anything

too rigorous for the ordinary police to handle. Everything from time travel to good taste.

Bartholomew Stiggins: Commonly known as 'Stig'. Neanderthal re-engineered from extinction, he

heads SpecOps 13 (Swindon), the policing agency responsible for re-engineered species such as

mammoths, dodos, sabre-toothed tigers and chimeras.

Chimera: Any unlicensed 'non-evolved life form' created by a hobby genetic sequencer. Illegal and

destroyed without mercy.

St Zvlkx: A thirteenth-century saint whose 'Kevealments' have an uncanny knack of coming true.

Superhoop: The World Croquet League final. Usually violent, always controversial.

Lola Vavoom: An actress who does not feature in this novel but has to appear in the dramatis

personae owing to a contractual obligation.

Minotaur: Half-man, half-bull son of Pasiphaë, the Queen of Crete. Escaped from custody and

consequently a PageRunner. Whereabouts unknown.

This book has been bundled with Special Features including:

'The Making of documentary, deleted scenes from all four books, out-takes and much more. To access

all these free bonus features, log on to: www.jasperfforde.com/specialtn4.html and enter the code word

as directed.

Acknowledgements

Frederick Warne & Co. is the owner of all rights, copyrights and trademarks in the Beatrix Potter

character names and illustrations.

I

A Cretan Minotaur in Nebraska

'Jurisfiction is the name given to the policing agency inside books. Working with the

intelligence-gathering capabilities of Text Grand Central, the many Prose Resource Operatives at

Jurisfiction work tirelessly to maintain the continuity of the narrative within the pages of all the books ever

written, a sometimes thankless task. Jurisfiction agents live mostly on their wits as they attempt to

reconcile the author's original wishes and readers' expectations within a strict and largely pointless set of

bureaucratic guidelines laid down by the Council of Genres. I headed Jurisfiction for over two years and

was always astounded by the variety of the work: one day I might be attempting to coax the impossibly

shy Darcy from the toilets and the next I would be thwarting the Martians' latest attempt to invade

Barnaby Rudge. It was challenging and full of bizarre twists. But when the peculiar and downright weird

become commonplace you begin to yearn for the banal."

THURSDAY NEXT – The Jurisfiction Chronicles

The Minotaur had been causing trouble far in excess of his literary importance. First by escaping from the

fantasy-genre PrisonBook Sword of the Zenobians, then by leading us on a merry chase across most of

fiction and thwarting all attempts to recapture him. The mythological half-man, half-bull son of Queen

Pasiphaë of Crete had been sighted within Riders of the Purple Sage only a month after his escape. We

were still keen on taking him alive at this point so we had darted him with a small dose of Slapstick.

Theoretically, we needed only to track outbreaks of custard-pie-in-face routines and

walking-into-lamp-post gags within fiction to be led to the cannibalistic man-beast. It was an

experimental idea and, sadly, also a dismal failure. Aside from Lafeu's celebrated mention of custard in

All's Well that Ends Well and the ludicrous four-wheeled chaise sequence in Pickwick Papers, little

was noticed. The Slapstick either hadn't been strong enough or had been diluted by the BookWorld's

natural aversion to visual jokes.

In any event we were still searching for him two years later in the Western genre, among the cattle drives

that the Minotaur found most relaxing. And it was for this reason that Commander Bradshaw and I

arrived at the top of page seventy-three of an obscure pulp from the thirties entitled Death at Double-X

Ranch.

'What do you think, old girl?' asked Bradshaw, whose pith helmet and safari suit were ideally suited to

the hot Nebraskan summer. He was shorter than me by almost a head but led age-wise by four decades;

his sun-dried skin and snowy-white moustache were a legacy of his many years in Colonial African

Fiction: he had been the lead character in the twenty-three 'Commander Bradshaw' novels, last published

in 1932 and last read in 1963. Many characters in fiction define themselves by their popularity, but not

Commander Bradshaw. Having spent an adventurous and entirely fictional life defending British East

Africa against a host of unlikely foes, and killing almost every animal it was possible to kill, he now

enjoyed his retirement and was much in demand at Jurisfiction, where his fearlessness under fire and

knowledge of the BookWorld made him one of the agency's greatest assets.

He was pointing at a weathered board that told us the small township not more than half a mile ahead

hailed by the optimistic name of Providence and had a population of 2,387.

I shielded my eyes against the sun and looked around. A carpet of sage stretched all the way to the

mountains less than five miles distant. The vegetation had a repetitive pattern that belied its fictional roots.

The chaotic nature of the real world that gave us soft undulating hills and random patterns of forest and

hedges was replaced within fiction by a landscape that relied on ordered repetitions of the author's initial

description. In the make-believe world where I had made my home, a forest has only eight different

trees, a beach five different pebbles, a sky twelve different clouds. A hedgerow repeated itself every

eight feet, a mountain range every sixth peak. It hadn't bothered me that much to begin with but after two

years living inside fiction I had begun to yearn for a world where every tree and rock and hill and cloud

had its own unique shape and identity. And the sunsets. I missed them most of all. Even the

best-described ones couldn't hold a candle to a real one. I yearned to witness once again the delicate

hues of the sky as the sun dipped below the horizon. From red to orange, to pink, to blue, to navy, to

black.

Bradshaw looked across at me and raised an eyebrow quizzically. As 'The Bellman' – the head of

Jurisfiction – I shouldn't really be out on assignment at all, but I was never much of a desk jockey and

capturing the Minotaur was important. He had killed one of our own, and that made it unfinished

business.

During the past week we had searched unsuccessfully through six civil war epics, three frontier stories,

twenty-eight high-quality Westerns and ninety-seven dubiously penned novellas before finding ourselves

within Death at Double-X Ranch, right on the outer rim of what might be described as acceptably

written prose. We had drawn a blank in every single book. No minotaur, nor even the merest whiff of

one, and believe me, they can whiff.

'A possibility?' asked Bradshaw, pointing at the Providence sign.

'We'll give it a try,' I replied, slipping on a pair of dark glasses and consulting my list of potential minotaur

hiding places. 'If we draw a blank we'll stop for lunch before heading off into The Oklahoma Kid.'

Bradshaw nodded, opened the breech of the hunting rifle he was carrying and slipped in a cartridge. It

was a conventional weapon but loaded with unconventional ammunition. Our position as the policing

agency within fiction gave us licensed access to abstract technology. One blast from the eraserhead in

Bradshaw's rifle and the Minotaur would be reduced to the building blocks of his fictional existence: text

and a bluish mist – all that is left when the bonds that link text to meaning are severed. Charges of cruelty

failed to have any meaning when at the last Beast Census there were over a million almost identical

minotaurs, all safely within the hundreds of books, graphic novels and urns that featured him. Ours was

different – an escapee. A PageRunner.

As we walked closer the sounds of a busy Nebraskan frontier town reached our ears. A new building

was being erected and the hammering of nails into lumber punctuated the clop of horses' hoofs, the clink

of harnesses and the rumble of cartwheels on compacted earth. The metallic ring of the blacksmith's

hammer mixed with the distant tones of a choir from the clapboard church, and all about was the general

conversational hubbub of busy townsfolk. We reached the corner of Eckley's Livery Stables and peered

cautiously down the main street.

Providence as we now saw it was happily enjoying the uninterrupted backstory, patiently awaiting the

protagonist's arrival in two pages' time. Blundering into the main narrative thread and finding ourselves

included within the story was not something we cared to do, and since the Minotaur avoided the primary

storyline for fear of discovery we were likely to stumble across him only in places like this. But if, for any

reason, the story did come anywhere near, I would be warned – I had a Narrative Proximity Device in

my pocket that would sound an alarm if the thread came too close. We could hide ourselves until it

passed by.

A horse trotted past as we stepped up on to the creaky decking that ran along the front of the saloon. I

stopped Bradshaw when we got to the swing-doors just as the town drunk was thrown out into the road.

The bartender walked out after him, wiping his hands on a linen cloth.

'And don't come back till you can pay your way!' he yelled, glancing at us both suspiciously.

I showed the barkeeper my Jurisfiction badge as Bradshaw kept a vigilant lookout. The whole Western

genre had far too many gunslingers for its own good; there had been some confusion over the numbers

required on the order form when the genre was inaugurated. Working in Westerns could sometimes entail

up to twenty-nine gunfights an hour.

'Jurisfiction,' I told him. 'This is Bradshaw, I'm Next. We're looking for the Minotaur.'

The barkeeper stared at me coldly.

'Think you's in the wrong genre, partner,' he said.

All characters or Generics within a book are graded A to D, one through ten. A-grades are the Gatsbys

and Jane Eyres, D-grades the grunts who make up street scenes and crowded rooms. The barkeeper

had lines so he was probably a C-2. Smart enough to get answers from but not smart enough to have

much character latitude.

'He might be using the alias Norman Johnson,' I went on, showing him a photo. 'Tall, body of a man,

head of a bull, likes to eat people?'

'Can't help you,' he said, shaking his head slowly as he peered at the photo.

'How about any outbreaks of Slapstick?' asked Bradshaw. 'Boxing glove popping out of a box,

sixteen-ton weights dropping on people, that sort of thing?'

The barkeeper laughed. 'Ain’t seen no weights droppin’ on nobody, but I heard tell the sheriff got hit in

the face with a frying pan last Toosday.'

Bradshaw and I exchanged glances.

'Where do we find the sheriff?' I asked.

We followed the barkeeper's directions and walked along the wooden decking past a barber shop and

two grizzled prospectors who were talking animatedly in authentic frontier gibberish. I stopped Bradshaw

when we got to an alleyway. There was a gunfight in progress. Or at least, there would have been a

gunfight had not some dispute arisen over the times allocated for their respective showdowns. Both sets

of gunmen – two dressed in light-coloured clothes, two in dark, with low-slung gunbelts decorated with

rows of shiny cartridges – were arguing over their gunfight time slots as two identical ladyfolk looked on

anxiously. The town mayor intervened and told them that if there was any more arguments they would

both lose their slot times and would have to come back tomorrow, so they reluctantly agreed to toss a

coin. The winners of the toss scampered into the main street as everyone dutifully ran for cover. They

squared up to one another, hands hovering over their Colt .455 at twenty paces. There was a flurry of

action, two loud detonations and one of the gunmen in black hit the dirt while the victor looked on grimly,

his opponent's shot having dramatically only removed his hat. His lady rushed up to hug him as he

reholstered his revolver with a flourish.

'What a load of tripe,' muttered Bradshaw. 'The real West wasn't like this!'

Death at Double-X Ranch was set in 1875 and written in 1908. Close enough to be historically

accurate, you would have thought, but no. Most Westerns tended to show a glamorised version of the

old West that hadn't really existed. In the real West a gunfight was a rarity, hitting someone with a

short-barrelled Colt .45 at anything other than close range a virtual impossibility: 1870s gunpowder

generated a huge amount of smoke; two shots in a crowded bar and you would be coughing – and

almost blind.

'That's not the point,' I replied as the dead gunslinger was dragged away. 'Legend is always far more

readable, and don't forget we're in pulp at present – poor prose is far more common than good prose

and it would be too much to hope that our bullish friend would be hiding out in Zane Grey or Owen

Wister.'

We continued on past the Majestic Hotel as a stagecoach rumbled by in a cloud of dust, the driver

cracking his long whip above the horses' heads.

'Over there,' said Bradshaw, pointing at a building opposite that differentiated itself from the rest of the

clapboard town by being made of brick. It had 'Sheriff' painted above the door. We walked quickly

across the road, our non-Western garb somewhat out of place among the long dresses, bonnets and

breeches, jackets, dusters, vests, gunbelts and bootlace ties. Only permanently billeted Jurisfiction

officers troubled to dress up, and many of the agents actively policing the Westerns are characters from

the books they patrol – so don't need to dress up anyway.

We knocked and entered. It was dark inside after the bright exterior and we blinked for few moments as

we accustomed ourselves to the gloom. On the wall to our right was a noticeboard liberally covered with

Wanted posters – pertaining not only to Nebraska but to the BookWorld in general; a yellowed example

offered $300 for information leading to the whereabouts of Big Martin. Below this was a chipped

enamelled coffee pot sitting atop a cast-iron stove, and on the wall to the left was a gun cabinet. A tabby

cat sprawled upon a large bureau. The far wall was the barred frontage to the cells, one of which held a

drunk fast asleep and snoring loudly on a bunk bed. In the middle of the room was a large desk which

was stacked high with paperwork – circulars from the Nebraska State Legislature, a few Council of

Genres Narrative Law amendments, a campanology society newsletter and a Sears/Roebuck catalogue

open at the 'fancy goods' section. Also on the desk were a pair of worn leather boots, and inside these

were a pair of feet attached, in turn, to the sheriff. His clothes were predominantly black and could have

done with a good wash. A tin star was pinned to his vest and all we could see of his face were the ends

of a large grey moustache that poked out from beneath his downturned Stetson. He was fast asleep, and

balanced precanously on the rear two legs of a chair which creaked as he snored.

'Sheriff?'

No answer.

'SHERIFF!'

He awoke with a start, began to get up, overbalanced and tipped over backward. He crashed heavily to

the floor and knocked against the bureau, which just happened to have a jug of water resting upon it. The

jug tipped over and its contents drenched the sheriff, who roared with shock. The noise upset the cat,

which awoke with a cry and leapt up the curtains, which collapsed with a crash on to the cast-iron stove,

spilling the coffee and setting fire to the tinder-dry linen drapes. I ran to put it out and knocked against the

desk, dislodging the lawman's loaded revolver, which fell to the floor, discharging a single shot which cut

the cord of a hanging stuffed moose's head which fell upon Bradshaw. So there were the three of us; me

trying to put out the fire, the sheriff covered in water and Bradshaw walking into furniture as he tried to

get the moose's head off. It was precisely what we were looking for: an outbreak of unconstrained and

wholly inappropriate Slapstick.

'Sheriff, I'm so sorry about this,' I muttered apologetically, having doused the fire, de-moosed Bradshaw

and helped a very damp lawman to his feet. He was over six foot tall, had a weather-beaten face and

deep blue eyes. I produced my badge. 'Thursday Next, head of Jurisfiction. This is my partner,

Commander Bradshaw.'

The sheriff relaxed and even managed a thin smile. 'Thought you was more of them Baxters,' he said,

brushing himself down and drying his hair with a 'Cathouses of Dawson City' tea cloth. 'I'm mighty glad

you're not. Jurisfiction, hey? Ain’t seen none of yous around these parts for longer than I care to

remember – quit it, Howell.'

The drunk, Howell, had awoken and was demanding a tipple 'to set him straight'.

'We're looking for the Minotaur,' I explained, showing the sheriff the photograph.

He rubbed his stubble thoughtfully and shook his head.

'Don't recall ever seeing this critter, Missy Next.'

'We have reason to believe he passed through your office not long ago – he's been marked with

Slapstick.'

'Ah!' said the sheriff. 'I was a-wonderin’ ’bout all that. Me and Howell here have been trippin' and

a-stumblin' for a whiles now – ain’t we, Howell?'

'You're darn tootin’,' said the drunk.

'He could be in disguise and operating under an alias,' I ventured. 'Does the name Norman Johnson mean

anything to you?'

'Can't say it does, Missy. We have twenty-six Johnsons here but all are C-7s – not 'portant 'nuff to have

fust names.'

I sketched a Stetson on to the photograph of the Minotaur, then a duster, vest and gunbelt.

'Oh!' said the sheriff with a sudden look of recognition. 'That Mr Johnson.'

'You know where he is?'

'Sure do. Had him in the cells only last week on charges of eatin’ a cattle rustler.'

'What happened?'

'Paid his bail and wuz released. Ain’t nothing in the statutes of Nebraska that says you can't eat rustlers.

One moment.'

There had been a shot outside followed by several yells from startled townsfolk. The sheriff checked his

Colt, opened the door and walked out. Alone on the street and facing him was a young man with an

earnest expression, hand quivering around his gun, the elegantly tooled holster of which I noticed had

been tied down – a sure sign of yet another potential gunfight.

'Go home, Abe!' the sheriff called out. 'Today's not a good day for dyin’.'

'You killed my pappy,' said the youth, 'and my pappy's pappy. And his pappy's pappy. And my brothers

Jethro, Hank, Hoss, Red, Peregrine, Marsh, Junior, Dizzy, Luke, Peregrine, George an' all the others.

I'm callin’ you out, lawman.'

'You said Peregrine twice.'

'He wuz special.'

'Abel Baxter,' whispered the sheriff out of the corner of his mouth, 'one of them Baxter boys. They turn

up regular as clockwork, and I kill ’em same ways as regular.'

'How many have you killed?' I whispered back.

'Last count, 'bout sixty. Go home, Abe, I won't tell yer again!'

The youth caught sight of Bradshaw and me and said:

'New deputies, Sheriff? Yer gonna need ’em!'

And it was then that we saw that Abel Baxter wasn't alone. Stepping out from the stables opposite were

four disreputable-looking characters. I frowned. They seemed somehow out of place in Death at

Double-X Ranch. For a start, none of them wore black, nor did they have tooled-leather double

gunbelts with nickel-plated revolvers. Their spurs didn't clink as they walked and their holsters were plain

and worn high on the hip – the weapon these men had chosen was the Winchester rifle. I noticed with a

shudder that one of the men had a button missing on his frayed vest and the sole on the toe of his boot

had come adrift. Flies buzzed around their unwashed and grimy faces and the sweat marks on their hats

had stained halfway to the crown. These weren't C-2 generic gunfighters from pulp, but well-described

A-ys from a novel of high descriptive quality – and if they could shoot as well as they had been realised

by the author, we were in trouble.

The sheriff sensed it too.

'Where yo' friends from, Abe?'

One of the men hooked his Winchester into the crook of his arm and answered in a low Southern drawl:

'Mr Johnson sent us.'

And they opened fire. No waiting, no drama, no narrative pace. Bradshaw and I had already begun to

move – squaring up in front of a gunman with a rifle might seem terribly macho but for survival purposes it

was a non-starter. Sadly, the sheriff didn't realise this until it was too late. If he had survived until page

164, as he was meant to, he would have taken a slug, rolled twice in the dust after a two-page build-up

and lived long enough to say a pithy final goodbye to his sweetheart who would have cradled him in his

bloodless dying moments. Not to be. Realistic violent death was to make an unwelcome entry into Death

at Double-X. The heavy lead shot entered the sheriff's chest and came out the other side, leaving an exit

wound the size of a saucer. He collapsed inelegantly on to his face and lay perfectly still, one arm

sprawled outward in a manner unattainable in life and the other hooked beneath him. He didn't collapse

flat, either. He ended up bent over on his knees with his backside in the air.

The gunmen stopped firing as soon as there was no target – but Bradshaw, his hunting instincts alerted,

had already drawn a bead on the sheriff's killer and fired. There was an almighty detonation, a brief flash

and a large cloud of smoke. The eraserhead hit home and the gunman disintegrated mid-stride into a brief

chrysanthemum of text which scattered across the main street, the meaning of the words billowing out

into a blue haze which hung near the ground for a moment or two before evaporating.

'What are you doing?' I asked, annoyed at his impetuosity.

'Him or us, Thursday,' replied Bradshaw grimly, pulling the lever down on his Martini-Henry to reload,

'him or us.'

'Did you see how much text he was composed of?' I replied angrily. 'He was almost a paragraph long.

Only featured characters get that kind of description – somewhere there's going to be a book one

character short!'

'But,' replied Bradshaw in an aggrieved tone, 'I didn't know that before I shot him, now, did I?'

I shook my head. Perhaps Bradshaw hadn't noticed the missing button, the sweat stains and the battered

shoes, but I had. Erasure of a featured part meant more paperwork than I really wanted to deal with.

From form F36/34 (discharge of an eraserhead) and form B9/32 (replacement of featured part) to the

P13/36 (narrative damage assessment), I could be bogged down for two whole days. I had thought

bureaucracy was bad in the real world, but here in the paper world it was everything.

'So what do we do?' asked Bradshaw. 'Ask politely for them to surrender?'

'I'm thinking,' I replied, pulling out my footnoterphone and pressing the button marked Cat. In fiction, the

commonest form of communication was by footnote, but way out here . . .

'Blast!' I muttered again. 'No signal.'

'Nearest repeater station is in The Virginian,' observed Bradshaw as he replaced the spent cartridge and

closed the breech before peering outside. 'And we can't bookjump direct from pulp to classic.'

He was right. We had been crossing from book to book for almost six days, and although we could

escape in an emergency, such a course of action would give the Minotaur more than enough time to

escape. Things weren't good, but they weren't bad either – yet.

'Hey!' I yelled from the sheriff's office. 'We want to talk!'

'Is that a fact?' came a clear voice from outside. 'Mr Johnson says he's all done talkin’ – less you be in

mind to offer amnesty.'

'We can talk about that!' I replied.

There was a beeping noise from my pocket.

'Blast,' I mumbled, consulting the Narrative Proximity Device. 'Bradshaw, we've got a story thread

inbound from the east, two hundred and fifty yards and closing. Page seventy-four, line six.'

Bradshaw quickly opened his copy of Death at Double-X Ranch and ran a finger along the line:

'. . . McNeil rode into the town of Providence, Nebraska, with fifty cents in his pocket and murder

on his mind . . .'

I peered cautiously out of the window. Sure enough, a cowboy on a bay horse was riding slowly into

town. Strictly speaking it didn't matter if we changed the story a little as the novella had been read only

sixteen times in the past ten years, but the code by which we worked was fairly unequivocal. 'Keep the

story as the author intended!' was a phrase bashed into me early on during my training. I had broken it

once and suffered the consequences – I didn't want to do it again.

'I need to speak to Mr Johnson,' I yelled, keeping an eye on McNeil, who was still some way distant.

'No one speaks to Mr Johnson less Mr Johnson says so,' replied the voice, 'but if you'll be offerin’ an

amnesty, he'll take it and promise not to eat no more people.'

'Was that a double negative?' whispered Bradshaw with disdain. 'I do so hate them.'

'No deal unless I meet Mr Johnson first!' I yelled back.

'Then there's no deal!' came the reply.

I looked out again and saw three more gunmen appear. The Minotaur had clearly made a lot of friends

during his stay in the Western genre.

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