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typescript version of the Tale of Tinuviel, where the Queen's name was
Gwenethlin and only became Melian in the course of its composition
(II. 51); and the manuscript version of that Tale which underlies the
typescript seems itself to have been one of the last completed elements in
the Lost Tales (see I. 204).
The Children of Hurin exists in two versions, which I shall refer to as
I and II, both of them found in manuscript and later typescript (IA, IB;
IIA, IIB). I do not think that the second is significantly later than the
first; it is indeed possible, and would not be in any way uncharacteristic,
that my father began work on II while he was still composing at a later
point in I. II is essentially an expansion of I, with many lines, and blocks
of lines, left virtually unchanged. Until the second version is reached it
will be sufficient to refer simply to 'A' and 'B', the manuscript and
typescript of the first version.
The manuscript A consists of two parts: first (a) a bundle of small
slips, numbered 1 -- 32. The poem is here in a very rough state with many
alternative readings, and in places at least may represent the actual
beginnings, the first words written down. This is followed by (b) a set of
large sheets of examination paper from the University of Leeds, num-
bered 33 ff., where the poem is for the most part written out in a more
finished form -- the second stage of composition; but my father wrote in
line-numbers continuously through (a) and (b) -- lines 1 -- 528 in (a), lines
528 ff. in (b). We have thus one sole text, not two, without any overlap;
and if (a), the slips, ever existed in the form of (b), the examination
sheets, that part has disappeared. In part (b) there are many later
emendations in pencil.
Based on this manuscript is the typescript B. This introduces changes
not found in A or its emendations; and it was itself emended both in ink
and pencil, doubtless involving several movements of revision. To take a
single line as exemplification: line 8 was written first in A:
Lo! Thalion in the throng of thickest battle
The line was emended, in two stages, to
Lo! Thalion Hurin in the throng of battle
and this was the form in B as typed; but B was emended, in two stages, to
Lo! Hurin Thalion in the hosts of war
It is obvious that to set this and a great many other similar cases out in a
textual apparatus would be a huge task and the result impossibly compli-
cated. The text that follows is therefore, so far as purely metrical-stylistic
changes are concerned, that of B as emended, and apart from a few
special cases there is no mention in the notes of earlier readings.
In the matter of names, however, the poem presents great difficulty;
for changes were made at quite different times and were not introduced
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