【2024年中考英语真题满分作文精选】热点话题01 个人情况类（解析版）

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热点话题 01 个人情况类

（一）

（2024·江苏苏州·中考真题）你校 English Reading Club 正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅

读内容为 Auggie’s Story（阅读 D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。

选择一：以 Sometimes people surprise us 为题，内容包括：

1．你对这句话的理解；

2．结合实际生活举例说明；

3．你得到的启发。

选择二：以 Trouble is a friend 为题，内容包括：

1．你对这句话的理解；

2．结合实际生活举例说明；

3．你得到的启发。

注意：

1．词数：100 左右；

2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；

3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；

4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。

Title: ____________

After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched.

_________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________

【答案】例文

Title: Trouble is a friend

After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. And I think trouble is a friend.

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The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a

reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.

In my English study last year, my grammar was very bad. That was a big trouble for me, because it

lowered my English score. But thanks to the help of my deskmate, she helped me make a grammar study

schedule and helped me with grammar every week. And I spent an hour studying grammar every day. In the

end, my grammar improved greatly.

In my opinion, trouble is bad, but it sometimes makes us better. It reminds us not to give up when

facing difficulties and to face them bravely.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；

第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；

第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。

[亮点词汇]

① thanks to 多亏

② help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事

③ in my opinion 在我看来

[高分句型]

①The meaning of this sentence is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a

reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）

②That was a big trouble for me, because it lowered my English score.（原因状语从句）

（二）

（2024·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友 Peter 用英文写一封邮件，向

他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。

（1）上周四，王红在回家途中看到一位上年纪的盲人在街角徘徊。

（2）王红与老人交流后，主动帮他过马路。

（3）路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。

（4）王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。

（5）你认为……

参考词汇：盲人ìììblind man

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徘徊ìììwander

要求：

（1）词数：80~100 个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear Peter,

It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.

Last

Thursday,_____________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________

What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

It is two weeks since you wrote to me. I’m writing to tell you a story about my classmate Wang Hong.

Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way

home. Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man. When they

crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hong took the old

man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind

girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others.

What do you think of the story? Waiting for your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

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① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；

② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图；

第二步，具体介绍王红所做的好事；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①on her way home 在她回家的路上

②offer to do sth 主动提出做某事

③communicate with 沟通

④learn from 向某人学习

[高分句型]

①When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently.（when 引导

的时间状语从句）

② I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl.（省略 that 的宾语从句）

（三）

（2024·四川达州·中考真题）赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到别人的帮助

更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容

提示，以“An Unforgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。

内容提示：1. 时间ìììì2. 地点ììììì3. 人物ììììì4. 事件ììì5. 感受

写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥一至两点。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

3. 不少于 90 词（题目不计入总词数）。

An Unforgettable Day

_______________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________

【答案】例文

An Unforgettable Day

As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of

trouble. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble. Here’s my unforgettable day of helping

others.

My classmate Jason was ill last week. He had to be in hospital, so I tried my best to help him. Yesterday

was Saturday, and my classmates and I went to see him together. We gave him some flowers, because fresh

and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Jason asked me some questions

about study and I brought him my notebooks. I was patient to answer his questions all the time. I hope he

can be better soon.

I like helping others. Firstly, helping others makes me happy. Secondly, helping others is also helping

myself. All in all, a helpful person is welcomed everywhere. I will try my best to help others in the future.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：要求以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问

题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图；

第二步，具体介绍那天的经历；

第三步，表达感受。

[亮点词汇]

① in trouble 处困难中

② What’s more 此外

③ all the time 一直

[高分句型]

① So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.（who 引导的定语从句）

②We gave him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy.

（because 引导的原因状语从句）

（四）

（2024·四川自贡·中考真题）学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请

你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

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