专题09 书面表达（解析版）

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专题 10 书面表达

考点五年考情（2020-2024）命题趋势

书面表达

2024 实践活动过程及你的感想。

2023 写一封英文自荐信。

2022 以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为

主题的实践活动

2021 学校开展“English Day”活

动，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感

受。

2020 你校举办的“传统中医进校

园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由。

中考可能会以做法建议类，经历感受类,活动和

计划安排类结合社会热点话题、要求学生用掌

握的语言来完成写作任务。

1.熟悉句型特点：熟悉英语句子的结构特点很

有必要，如五种简单句的基本结构，陈述句、

疑问句、感叹句的结构特点等，在平时应多记

多练。

2.背诵范文：收集历年中考英语书面表达题的

范文或报刊上的优秀文章，每天花一些时间大

声朗读，力争背下来以拓展写作思路、培养语

感。

3.有的放矢勤训练：针对中考体裁和题材，坚

持常规训练，由词到词组，再到句子，连句成

段，连段成篇。

(2024 年福建省中考真题)

假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友 Henry 对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合

以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数 80 左右。

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Henry,

I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Henry,

I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it.

In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we

listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center,

where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational.

The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional

art!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：结合所给图示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动；

第二步，具体介绍活动的时间以及过程；

第三步，谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

learn about①了解到

not only...but also...②不但……而且……

[高分句型]

Let me tell you something about it.①（祈使句）

After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.②（定语从句）

(2023 年福建省中考真题)

“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李

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华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词

数80 左右。

What kind of person you are friendly, active…

What you are good at speak English, tell stories…

What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…

注意事项：

1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I

am suitable for the job.

First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have

won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local

culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help

foreigners better understand the life of the village.

I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.

Yours,

Li Hua

(2022 年福建省中考真题)

假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英

语给笔友 John 写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数 80 左右。

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注意事项：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Dear John,

How is everything going?

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.

On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and

watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to

carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work

and learnt to value each grain.

Have you had any experience of this kind?

Yours,

Li Hua

(2021 福建中考真题)

　　假定你是学校英语报小记者李华, 上周学校开展了“English Day”活动, 请你根据下面的海报和学生参

加活动的数据写一篇报道, 介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数 80 左右。

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注意事项:

1.必须包含提示内容, 可适当发挥, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

2.意思清楚, 表达通顺, 行文连贯, 书写规范;

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Our School English Day

Our school English Day was a great success.

参考范文

Our School English Day

Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 4:30 p.m. on

June 18th.

Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the

cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling.

We spoke highly of the English Day.We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the

importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.

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